Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
KIA Ora Nike this is ken from Ahipara school I liked your work. It was simple and effective. Maybe you should put some more stuff in? KA PAI keep up the good work KEN
Hello Unaiki. I really like how you were simple with your poem and you didn´t put much detail. Also,it is cool that it is an acrostic poem. Keep it up,and blog ya later!!!
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ReplyDeleteKIA Ora Nike this is ken from Ahipara school I liked your work. It was simple and effective. Maybe you should put some more stuff in?
ReplyDeleteKA PAI keep up the good work
KEN
Hello Unaiki. I really like how you were simple with your poem and you didn´t put much detail. Also,it is cool that it is an acrostic poem. Keep it up,and blog ya later!!!
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